18 Comments

  1. Y
    July 10, 2015 @ 11 : 23 AM

    I'm glad it was fiction. Can't handle heart breaks.

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  2. ak β„’
    July 10, 2015 @ 11 : 49 AM

    I don't know heartbreaks yet. So, I can't write much about it.
    Thanks for dropping by. πŸ™‚

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  3. Harini
    July 10, 2015 @ 12 : 12 PM

    This actually happens a lot in real life too. But I am glad this was fiction.

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  4. ak β„’
    July 10, 2015 @ 1 : 57 PM

    I know right. I just interpreted a part of someone's life.
    Thanks. πŸ™‚

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  5. CookieCrumbs Inc.
    July 13, 2015 @ 7 : 54 PM

    Ouch :/

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  6. ak β„’
    July 13, 2015 @ 8 : 20 PM

    Yeah. πŸ™

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  7. Wanderer
    July 17, 2015 @ 2 : 06 AM

    Well I am glad this is fiction πŸ™‚ Well written!

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  8. ak β„’
    July 17, 2015 @ 10 : 25 AM

    Me too. πŸ˜› I don't know what I would do if it were to be real.

    Why, thank you. πŸ™‚

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  9. Akshitha
    July 21, 2015 @ 12 : 05 AM

    One word….magical..loved it..
    I remember I already told u dat ua too good at writing fiction..today u proved me right once again.

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  10. ak β„’
    July 22, 2015 @ 1 : 28 AM

    Why, thank you !
    Haha, I am glad that you still believe and I haven't broken your word, yet ! πŸ˜€

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  11. Gayathri Baskaran
    July 25, 2015 @ 10 : 25 AM

    That was really good ! I could totally picture the setting.

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  12. ak β„’
    July 25, 2015 @ 1 : 14 PM

    Thank you. πŸ™‚
    I am glad you liked it. πŸ˜€

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  13. AVY
    July 28, 2015 @ 6 : 21 PM

    Sounds very real, like something I've experienced a couple of times.

    /Avy

    http://mymotherfuckedmickjagger.blogspot.com

    β™₯

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  14. ak β„’
    July 29, 2015 @ 12 : 12 AM

    I think I just added a few more details and a bit of imagination from the things I saw.

    Thanks for dropping by. πŸ™‚

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  15. rudraprayaga
    July 30, 2015 @ 10 : 47 PM

    A factual fiction as things like that happens quite often.Nice.

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  16. Saumy Nagayach
    September 8, 2017 @ 11 : 08 AM

    We all live in the dreamy world and always look for happy endings but ouch, that was a bitter twist in the end. I’m glad it’s a piece of action. πŸ˜€

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    • ajaykontham
      September 8, 2017 @ 12 : 05 PM

      I know right. Life isn’t fair all the time. πŸ˜›
      Well, it could be someone’s story too. #JustSaying

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  17. Saumy Nagayach
    September 8, 2017 @ 11 : 11 AM

    Ahh.. Auto correct sucks… loved this piece of fiction πŸ˜€

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